I think it's too mono, but maybe you were going for it
I meant it isn't much stereo, the acid and most of it feels like they are all clumped together in the same place of stereo field
I think it's too mono, but maybe you were going for it
I meant it isn't much stereo, the acid and most of it feels like they are all clumped together in the same place of stereo field
Sorry, what? I dont understand you. No
what happened to the mix TwT the trippy sounds are nice but is that kick clipping or just happy to see me?
Pretty ok
nice bright sounds
Thank you ^^
I'm personally not much of a fan of drums in ambient music but they work here! the arp melody is kinda uninteresting and doesn't fit imho, but the pads and soundscape is very good
Thank you!
genre - ambient
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The release just came out and I didn't have time to set the genres, the default is ambient, I've already fixed it
what does the title mean?
"something in there"
bro I don't think the melody in the second half fit the song much TwT
maybe try separating the ideas a bit?
I don't agree, it's mostly the same instruments and almost the same chord progression, and I do use the same unconventional scale, But thanks for the feedback (I do listen to prog and alt rock so maybe I am just more used to not keeping it the same idk)
drums are fine, albeit I'd make the kick a bit more dynamic. the second melody isn't that great and it's the one I'd work on improving, or maybe change the first one if you prefer. either way, they aren't working that well together
Thanks for the review, I'm sorry for the massively delayed response but forgot to reply for a really long time ☠️. I think the kick was the part that needed the most improvement but after listening to it a couple of times I kinda noticed too that the melodies didn't really go that great together 😭.
Anyways thanks for the honest response, greatly appreciated!
- Sgtc1
why would you crush the things you like about someone tho? Nice track!
I don't think it's something a healthy person would ever do on purpose. I guess jealousy, fear, insecurity. Sort of the opposite of "if you love something set it free", if you cling to something you love you can end up smothering it to death. Anyway the song's meant to be about two vampires eating each other, so not exactly a good model for a healthy relationship haha. Thanks for listening!
Hi, I like making bad tracks, hopefully I'll improve as time passes.
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